Fix this book.
Write the next one better.
You've written the book. Now what? I'm a Big 5 novelist and career educator who helps you see what isn't working, why, and how to fix it.
Does this sound like you?
Form rejections don't tell you what went wrong. We'll look at the book together, find what isn't landing, and fix it before you query again.
Maybe this is your first book, or maybe an earlier one didn't get the reception you hoped for. Either way, you need a developmental editor who's on your side.
Traditional or indie, you know how this works. You just need a sharp, reliable editor for the book you're writing now.
I've sat on your side of the editorial letter.
I've published eight novels with four of the Big Five houses, so I know what it's like to hear that something isn't working, wrestle with revisions, and turn feedback into a stronger book.
I'm also a career educator with a master's degree in adult learning. I don't just tell you what to change. I explain why, using examples from your own pages, so the lessons carry into every book after this one.
Choose the depth you need.
Every manuscript is different, so I quote each project individually based on length and scope.
An editorial letter on structure, character, pacing, and stakes, with no notes inside the manuscript. Includes a follow-up call.
A detailed editorial letter, notes throughout your manuscript, and a follow-up call to plan your revision.
From "something's off" to a plan.
Send your word count, genre, and what's worrying you. I'll reply with a quote and a start date.
I start with what you're trying to accomplish, then find what's getting in the way, and why.
A clear editorial letter with concrete ways forward, explained so you understand the craft behind each note.
A follow-up call by phone or video to answer questions and help you decide what to tackle first.
Helpful, applicable, understandable.
"Her feedback was helpful, applicable, and understandable at every stage."
"She delivered insightful and detailed feedback on my manuscript that I know will make it stronger… I highly recommend her."
"Throughout the process, she provided helpful hints and techniques, pointing out structural issues…"
Tell me a little about your book.
I'll email you within a few business days with a quote and my next open start date. I'm currently booking for early 2027.